How is the last two paragraphs of my story?

Change it. First of all, the first sentence is insulting. Show it, don't say it! As for the second sentence, do you mean black knights? Don't forget that K. And I hate the "We were winning" sentence. You have barely described the fight! Show it, don't say it. And as far as I'm concerned, any fight that only takes up one little paragraph isn't even worth putting in. Your style of writing makes this incredibly boring. You sound like an man with dementia trying to remember enough of the story to tell your grandchildren. Its okay to speed read, but not to speed write. Don't skim.